Thoughts as I Watch It Rain

It doesn’t rain often in Southern California,
but when it does it’s a pretty big deal.
Headlines appear,
roads shimmer,
cars spin,
mud slides,
and people tend to lose their ever-loving minds.

The playoffs are rare in Detroit City,
but when in town it’s a pretty big deal.
Jerseys appear,
tickets inflate,
excitement builds,
parties proliferate,
and people tend to lose their ever-loving minds.

Not many people win the lottery,
but when they do it’s a pretty big deal.
Relatives appear,
interviews occur,
purchases transpire,
plans change,
and people tend to lose their ever-loving minds.

A hole-in-one can seem impossible,
but when it happens it’s a pretty big deal.
Astonishment appears,
laughter erupts,
joy abounds,
celebrations begin,
and people tend to lose their ever-loving minds.

I think of all the things that I haven’t done—yet.
They may seem impossible,
but if they ever happen, it will be a pretty big deal.

And that’s enough to keep trying.

Obstacles appear,
critics scoff,
fear mounts,
hope wanes,
and I want to lose my ever-loving mind.

But I won’t quit.
The wait just might make it better.

4 responses to “Thoughts as I Watch It Rain

  1. Shannan Suzzette Taylor's avatar Shannan Suzzette Taylor

    There is no doubt – you are a writer’s writer – and that is a pretty big deal! ✏️📝📚

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  2. We don’t often have snow in Middle Tennessee
    But we got about 6 inches this week and it was a pretty big deal
    Temperatures plunged (got down to -3 at my house)
    School’s out
    Church parking lot is solid ice (service tomorrow on YouTube in my PJs)
    Grocery shelves are emptied
    Kids slide down every hillside
    Streets are salted
    And the local Rednecks tend to lose their ever loving minds!

    You think of some of the things you haven’t done – yet
    And keep trying
    I think of some of the things I have already done
    And ask for forgiveness
    Two sides of the same coin, I guess
    Every sunrise is another chance
    That hope, along with my wife of almost 56 years, is what keeps me from losing my every loving mind

    Stay safe & dry out there on the Left Coast

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